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Capture the Flag part 1

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Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash had grown concerned they hadn't seen Fluttershy all day. They walked on the arched bridge that lead to her Cottage. They began to hear what sounded like Fluttershy's laughter. Curious they crept up to the window then looked inside. They saw Discord skittering his claws along Fluttershy's belly. The Pegasai's laughter sounded adorable, but what puzzled them was that Fluttershy was chained in a hanging x-position, her hind hooves chained to the restraints on the floor and her front hooves secured to the ceiling by similar restraints. She was also blindfolded.

"What the hay is going on?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"I'm not sure Rainbow, let's just hope its nothing bad." Twilight replied.

They saw Discord leave so the two ponies decided to go in now.  They walked in the front door up to their bound friend. She panted heavily from the tickling she was subjected too and she looked pretty adorable. Twilight removes her blindfold.

"Fluttershy what's going on?" Twilight asked.

"Oh I didn't mean to worry you, it's like this Discord and I are playing a game of Capture the Flag with the addition of being able to tickle interrogate each other for the location of the flag. I got caught yesterday and he's really tickled me silly." Fluttershy explained.

The exhausted look Fluttershy had was proof enough, her eyelids were half closed and her body was hanging limp. Still a smile was on her face which told her friends that she was having fun. They had come to trust Discord more lately, he was still a mischievous trickster but he was indeed their friend.

"Well would you like to escape?" Rainbow asked.

"If you help me you'll be entering the game too, which means he can capture you as well." Fluttershy explained.  

"We're sure it sounds fun." Twilight smiled.

Within an instant sleep powder fell over the two ponies heads causing them to fall asleep on their backs. Discord appeared with a grin on his face. He had enough rope for both ponies.

"I knew they'd join in, let's see if I can't make you talk now Fluttershy my cute captive." Discord grinned.

He lays both of them on the floor then has the ropes tie them in stretched out I-positions the ends of the ropes securing to two hooks at opposite ends on the floor. He decided on blindfolding them once they wake up and until then turned his attention to his exhausted captive.

"This will be your one and only chance to talk before they wake up. Stay stubborn and they'll get the tickles while you watch." Discord smirked.

"I won't talk Discord." Fluttershy said with a tired but confident smirk.

That was the answer he expected he had really come to love Fluttershy like a sister and he had always wanted the chance to tickle torture her. He was glad Fluttershy refused to break because it meant she trusted him and that she loved being tickled as well. Though he knew she had limits which is why the arrival of Rainbow and Twilight was very lucky. Now he could give his captive a break while he subjected the new ones to the same torture, at least he would when they woke up.

He snapped his fingers making a feather appear in his hand. He edges the tip of it to within inches of Fluttershy's belly. Fluttershy gulps as her belly can't help but shiver and sweat from anticipation. She didn't wait long for the feather attack stroking along her belly sending her back into adorable laughter. She had no energy to squirm anymore so she just had to take all of it. A second feather strokes into her right foreleg pit sending her into hysterics. She had to endure this intense tickling ever since she was captured and she loved it. Tears stream down her cheeks as Discord tormented her ticklish body.  

"Ready to talk my dear?" Discord smirked.

"NEVERHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!" Fluttershy laughed.

The sound of her laughter made Twilight and Rainbow wake up. Discord finally stopped her torture leaving her gasping for breath so he could focus on the new captives. The two ponies quickly realized their situation.

"Welcome to our Capture the Flag Game girls. For trying to rescue Fluttershy you are now prisoners as well, of course you don't know where her flag is so I'm going to tickle you two and have her watch. I know you won't beg for mercy right away but I know once you do Fluttershy will surrender." Discord smirked.

"Do your worst Discord." Twilight smirked back.

"Yeah we can take anything you throw at us." Rainbow Dash boasted.

However she looked to her right to see a blindfold had just appeared over Twilight's eyes. Soon she too couldn't see anything and now they were at the ticklish mercy of Discord. In no time she felt ten claws skittering along her defenseless belly. She did her best to hold it in but Discord added two feathers into it they attacked her front leg pits really fast. After enduring nearly fifteen minutes her laughter finally came out. Discord seemed excited about it because his speed increased. She didn't hear Twilight's laughter which meant their captor would tickle them one at a time.

She squealed with cute laughter as Discord blew a huge raspberry into her belly. Her adorable squirming was only a reflex, even though she knew Discord intended to make them beg for mercy she knew he'd stop once Fluttershy talked. She squealed even louder from an even stronger raspberry. Finally her belly was given a break as she panted heavily.

"The Mighty Rainbow Dash, weak to tickling it's so adorable." Discord playfully teased.

"Oh shut up!" Rainbow Dash blushed.

Twilight was about to say something when she felt something feathery on her belly. It made her shiver and sweat knowing full well what it meant. She could heard Discord chuckle obviously very happy that he could finally tickle her.

"Well Twilight your next any last words?" Discord grinned.

"Yes Torture me all you want." Twilight smirked back.

"If you insist."

to be continued.
With Discord now a good guy I felt there were a lot of times he could've tickled the other ponies. He seems like the perfect guy for that too but there hasn't been one yet so I've decided to make a multi-part tickle story where eventually the mane six and Spike take on Discord in a capture the flag game. I don't know when I want it to end just yet but I hope you enjoy this, remember to comment on the story when you read it.
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This is definitely a cute, sweet story. I’m hoping you’ll make a part two so Twilight can get the giggles.